Saturday, March 27, 2010
The School system needs the HST and YOu
Thirty four million dollars, a great lost indeed. An economic recession, later the 2010 winter olympics, losing money is inevitable. The government is partially responsible for the budget cuts on our socially owned public school system, and they are doing their best to help. Since the school system is government owned, they have they liberty to allocate the wealth they share. When the government has more money, they will increase budget funding. Currently, the controversial HST is undergoing a political heated debate, whether the excution of this new tax reform is needed. All I can say is if we need more money for our education, then the government must take more of our pocket money to fund it, therefore the introduction to the HST is imperative. With the extra tax money we pay, the government will earn more money, and will have the ability to mitigate financial stress such as debts, maintenance and funding. The only two powers a teenager possess to ameliorate this finanacial complication is by one, get hired and two, spend money. By getting hired, you have created a job. The government wants us teenagers to get a job so our paychecks will subsidize their financial needs through spending and circulating cash. For our school district to fluorish once more, the taxes will be harmonized and the jobs must be created. All workers shall unite to forge a stronger Canada for the better future!
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I hate the indeed part...The word has too much associations with sarcasm...
ReplyDeleteany ways excluding all those unnecessary complex political statements...
1. You are viewing the government as a responsible body doing the necessary job.
2. And that cause me to disagree with you.
3. Getting hired doesn't create a job...You are making someone else lose their job...
4. If we get a job, we are paid by cash. And 18- are not subjected to income tax or GST when we purchase clothes.
5. I like the last part except that it sounds like those words said before revolutions...
Over all, your paragraph is organized and filled with emotion. However, I think the exclaimation mark helped more for emotional appeals than what your word choice...
First, an error that bothered me. The HST is not "undergoing" a debate. Concepts (ie. HST) cannot undergo anything, nor can something that cannot cause physical impact, (ie. debate) cause something to be undergone. For instance, you could say "the bathrooms are undergoing repairs," but you cannot say "the controversial HST is undergoing a political heated debate." (You also have an adjective splitting up a double-termed noun, which makes the sentence more confusing on the whole.)
ReplyDeleteSecond, WOW. You seem to have a very positive view on the whole matter. I would like to point out that the government, whether or not it has our best interests in mind, has not said that they will put money back into the education program at any given point in time. Also, HST won't cause the paying of larger taxes, it simply minimizes the tax payed by businesses.
Oh, and Jisong, in making your fourth "point," (if we can really call it fourth as your second wasn't a point and your third was made on false pretenses) you have overlooked that we will be subjected to the full tax once HST is in effect. This is perhaps, what Steven is getting at. Also, it is time for a Revolution, but what Steven is suggesting is not remotely revolutionary, unless you count being a submissive citizen as being a revolutionary.
Oh, and just to poke a hole in your fourth argument, Jisong, I have a job and my employers don't pay with cash.
Oh wow. Small novel that. Just goes to show how bored I've been.
ReplyDeleteman eating bug killing chicken that was cooked.
ReplyDeletemy example of a confusing sentence.
Sorry about the confucing phrase.
ReplyDeleteWhy do we have to approach this matter in a negative view? I just wanted to change the perspective for a change!
Ages 18 and under do not get GST? I never noticed.
You two really have the spare time to monitor the class blog.
I have to say, both of your criticism are weak because the two of you focus more on grammar corrections than anything else. THIS IS NOT A PAPER!!! I DONT CARE!!!
If not cash,what does your boss pay you???
To Daniel:
ReplyDeleteI think I know what you will post on my blurp on the education budget cut...................... WE TEENS SHOULD RISE TO POWER!!!!!!!!!
I have 7 comments...
ReplyDelete1.Italiot. They can pay you by cheque!
2.Etaliot. It is not paper but IT IS ENGLISH!!
3.Ataliot. Forget about power, care more about gaining it!!!
4.You never noticed the absense of GST is because you never bothered to research!!!!
5. It is not call having spare time. It is called account sitting!!!!!!
6. Critics never argue with the criticized about whether the critics' criticism are strong or not-they don't need to!!!!!!
7.Who is Daniel?!!!!!!!
Names of objects in the same categories:
ReplyDeletecows, milk, cheese, rats, fleas, flu, monkeys, chipamzees, cannbalism, influenza, radiation, h1n1, swine, humans, antibiotics, superbugs, extinction.
sure..................but everything on Earth's surface is related to humans. The list of categories just goes on.
ReplyDeleteI thought it is absence not absense, check your spelling you petty grammar nazi! I am aware of the hypocrisy of this comment.
ReplyDeleteCreamed peach & strawberry slush, what are u talking about?
ReplyDeleteyour spelling errors!!!
ReplyDeletewhat spelling error?
ReplyDeleteWhy bother to correct spelling? And why be so systematic? Yes I focused on grammar, you're post is boring and looks like something I'd read in one of those pathetic newspapers they have at school. It's predictable. And yes, I have a lot of spare time, this is what happens when one is an insomniac. Four hours of sleep a night = much more time to do with what I will. I was bored, therefore I checked the blog. My boss pays me through the net. You can do your own banking online, with memorandums. It's much more convenient.
ReplyDeleteJisong: Primarily, did you honestly research whether teens were exempt from GST? What's wrong with you? Why exactly did we need to be informed of all those things which were in the same categories? And Steven pointed out your spelling error.
...Daniel is a friend of mine. I told him to check out the blog and to try to guess which postee was me. He thought I was "Guess who I am" ...horribly insulted. :(
i dont know what spelling error though...
ReplyDeleteIn "point" four of your seven pointed comment you spelled absence "absense." This done after you corrected Steven when he spelled it "abscence." (Which, by the way, is more accurate than your "absense" if you are spelling by logical derivation from Latin).
ReplyDeleteNot really. Abscence sounds a lot different from absence. and Absense sounds closer.
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